I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Lexi. Wow! You are amazing me by how hard working and focused you are. I only showed you the Mind Mup tool today and you had it created and posted to your blog before the end of the school day. I had to zoom in to read your ideas, but when I did, I could see you had some great suggestions for keeping a clean environment. Fantastic job. There is a virtual fish ticket on its way to you.
Wow Lexi, you have put a lot of work into this. You must be very proud of your work. I like your ideas about keeping your environment clean. I had never thought about making your bed as part of keeping your environment clean, and keeping your room clean and tidy. Keep up the good work Lexi. 😊😊
This is great work Lexi lots of really good ideas. I wonder if you can show me how to create one of these when we are back at school. I would love to be able to create a mind map on the computer. You have been working very hard and posting lots to your blog. You should be very proud of your work. I look forward to seeing what you get up to next time. Ka Pai!
I love the way you used MindMup for creating your presentation. You put the main theme in the middle with a colour that catches the audiences' eyes straight away. It looks like it's done by someone professional. If this is your first work using MindMup I wonder how good you will be when you become proficient. Fantastic work, Lexi!
Hi Lexi, I think you have done a great job of creating a mind map. It is easy to understand and follow. You have got a lot of great ideas included which have me inspired to do a bit of tidying up around my house today! Have you noticed there wasn't as much litter around our streets when all the takeaway shops were closed? Keep up the great learning in your bubble:)
Wow Lexi this is a great mind mup! I love the way you have thought about the different ways to keep your environment tidy and why you need to do it as well! This shows you have been really thoughtful and focused when you were making this. I like that you you told people not to litter but to also pick up rubbish that they see, this will definitely make the outside environment better and will stop the rubbish heading to the ocean as you said. I wonder do you and your brother and sister share jobs at home to keep the house tidy? Ka pai Lexi you did an awesome job!
Hi Lexi, Mrs Abernethy here. I am very impressed with the Mind Mup you have made. The ideas of keeping your home and the environment clean are great. Wouldn't the world be a beautiful place if everyone followed your ideas. Well done
Hi Lexi, You've included lots of great, yet simple, ideas that we should all be doing to help keep our environment clean. I saw a piece of advice once, that you should make your bed as soon as you get out of it... that way you have already achieved one thing for the day. It's amazing how tidy that makes the room look too! Your MindMup deserves a larger audience so that more people can hear your message! Fingers Crossed!
Hi Lexi, what great ideas you have on how to keep an environment clean. I love the way you presented it on a mindmup. I need to look into how to do these too.
Morning Lexi. What an amazing job you have done thinking about how to keep the environment clean. This is such an important issue! I love your suggestions as they will also be really helpful at home too. I wonder if we could make a lit like this for at school and encourage everoyne to help keep our school enviornment super clean? Perhaps you could help?
Well done Lexi, this has some wonderful ideas, that if everyone followed, the world would be a tidier happier place.Now all we have to do is be the role model for these ideas and hopefully we can inspire others to care and to do.One person can make a difference.Stay awesome Lexi.
Hi Lexi, well done on you Mindmup, you have some very good and simple things in there. Having a tidy room and a made bed daily is good for the environment but also your mind, so with this you are also looking after your wellbeing as well as the environment. Well done :)
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Kia ora Lexi.
ReplyDeleteWow! You are amazing me by how hard working and focused you are. I only showed you the Mind Mup tool today and you had it created and posted to your blog before the end of the school day. I had to zoom in to read your ideas, but when I did, I could see you had some great suggestions for keeping a clean environment.
Fantastic job. There is a virtual fish ticket on its way to you.
Wow Lexi, you have put a lot of work into this. You must be very proud of your work. I like your ideas about keeping your environment clean. I had never thought about making your bed as part of keeping your environment clean, and keeping your room clean and tidy. Keep up the good work Lexi. 😊😊
ReplyDeleteThis is great work Lexi lots of really good ideas. I wonder if you can show me how to create one of these when we are back at school. I would love to be able to create a mind map on the computer. You have been working very hard and posting lots to your blog. You should be very proud of your work. I look forward to seeing what you get up to next time. Ka Pai!
ReplyDeleteI love the way you used MindMup for creating your presentation. You put the main theme in the middle with a colour that catches the audiences' eyes straight away. It looks like it's done by someone professional. If this is your first work using MindMup I wonder how good you will be when you become proficient. Fantastic work, Lexi!
ReplyDeleteHi Lexi, I think you have done a great job of creating a mind map. It is easy to understand and follow. You have got a lot of great ideas included which have me inspired to do a bit of tidying up around my house today! Have you noticed there wasn't as much litter around our streets when all the takeaway shops were closed? Keep up the great learning in your bubble:)
ReplyDeleteWow Lexi this is a great mind mup! I love the way you have thought about the different ways to keep your environment tidy and why you need to do it as well! This shows you have been really thoughtful and focused when you were making this. I like that you you told people not to litter but to also pick up rubbish that they see, this will definitely make the outside environment better and will stop the rubbish heading to the ocean as you said. I wonder do you and your brother and sister share jobs at home to keep the house tidy? Ka pai Lexi you did an awesome job!
ReplyDeleteHi Lexi, Mrs Abernethy here. I am very impressed with the Mind Mup you have made.
ReplyDeleteThe ideas of keeping your home and the environment clean are great.
Wouldn't the world be a beautiful place if everyone followed your ideas.
Well done
Wow Lexi! You have been busy! Keep up the awesome learning!
ReplyDeleteHi Lexi,
ReplyDeleteYou've included lots of great, yet simple, ideas that we should all be doing to help keep our environment clean. I saw a piece of advice once, that you should make your bed as soon as you get out of it... that way you have already achieved one thing for the day. It's amazing how tidy that makes the room look too!
Your MindMup deserves a larger audience so that more people can hear your message! Fingers Crossed!
Hi Lexi, what great ideas you have on how to keep an environment clean. I love the way you presented it on a mindmup. I need to look into how to do these too.
ReplyDeleteMorning Lexi. What an amazing job you have done thinking about how to keep the environment clean. This is such an important issue! I love your suggestions as they will also be really helpful at home too. I wonder if we could make a lit like this for at school and encourage everoyne to help keep our school enviornment super clean? Perhaps you could help?
ReplyDeleteWell done Lexi, this has some wonderful ideas, that if everyone followed, the world would be a tidier happier place.Now all we have to do is be the role model for these ideas and hopefully we can inspire others to care and to do.One person can make a difference.Stay awesome Lexi.
ReplyDeleteHi Lexi, well done on you Mindmup, you have some very good and simple things in there. Having a tidy room and a made bed daily is good for the environment but also your mind, so with this you are also looking after your wellbeing as well as the environment. Well done :)
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