I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Bonjour Lexi it is Lacie here. I like your blog post about earthquakes. Just remember to proof read your writing before you post it to your blog because some of it does not make sense. Remember for next time to add a sentance about what you had to do and why.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Bonjour Lexi it is Lacie here.
ReplyDeleteI like your blog post about earthquakes. Just remember to proof read your writing before you post it to your blog because some of it does not make sense.
Remember for next time to add a sentance about what you had to do and why.