I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
In my failey we eat fis and his to .and i eat it evey faw wes wet we have ti .we mes liy eat ti it is Blaosey when we going tet and it is lat like 7 30
Kia ora Lexi. I like that you put some pictures of fish and chips in your blog post, it's making me hungry. You could fix up the writing because it's hard to understand what you're writing. Also you could fix up the sentences and pressing enter to drop down lines because the words are coming out of the page.
hi my names is ethan i what are you doing to day but the sad thing about u blog post is that sonme of it si hang if the slied but i hope u have a good day bye
Kia Ora Lexi, I think those look yum but, you should update it and make the text more smaller to make it easier to read. You can also add some more description to the fish and chips 😄
Kia Ora Lexi, The Fish and Chips look really yummy and tasty. Maybe next time make you writing smaller some people can read it, but still good job. How often do you eat fish and chip? Blog You Later.
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tet and it is lat like 7 30
Looks so yummy Lexi! Do you have a favourite type of fish? Have you ever had Akaroa cod?
ReplyDeleteKia ora Lexi.
ReplyDeleteI like that you put some pictures of fish and chips in your blog post, it's making me hungry. You could fix up the writing because it's hard to understand what you're writing. Also you could fix up the sentences and pressing enter to drop down lines because the words are coming out of the page.
hi my names is ethan i what are you doing to day but the sad thing about u blog post is that sonme of it si hang if the slied but i hope u have a good day bye
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Lexi, I think those look yum but, you should update it and make the text more smaller to make it easier to read. You can also add some more description to the fish and chips 😄
ReplyDeleteKia Ora lexi
ReplyDeleteThat is cool the food is good
I love it you keep looking at food
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Kia Ora Lexi,
ReplyDeleteThe Fish and Chips look really yummy and tasty. Maybe next time make you writing smaller some people can read it, but still good job. How often do you eat fish and chip?
Blog You Later.