I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Im lexi and ima little bit smart .i love art and i like donut .I Like flowers .I really don’t like payton when she wakes me up at night.If I could have one wish would be to have my own bedroom.
Kia ora, Milla here from Gilberthorpe School. I liked the way you have said I like donuts I Know there yummy, Maybe next time you could add your favorite animal ? Did you think about adding more about yourself, Good day (:
GutenTag, Courtney here.I like the way you write about you liking donuts, because I do to, I love the ones that have chocolate on top, did you think about doing more words and some pictures of what your doing, maybe next time you should make it sound like its making sence
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Kia ora, Milla here from Gilberthorpe School. I liked the way you have said I like donuts I Know there yummy, Maybe next time you could add your favorite animal ? Did you think about adding more about yourself, Good day (:
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ReplyDeleteGutenTag, Courtney here.I like the way you write about you liking donuts, because I do to, I love the ones that have chocolate on top, did you think about doing more words and some pictures of what your doing, maybe next time you should make it sound like its making sence
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